Yeah. It says "we're spoiled-brat red-diaper cowardly common criminals who think we're important grown-up deep-thinkers."
If that's not what you MEANT to say, perhaps you should reconsider your choice of medium.
(I've been wondering for awhile if it's possible to apply Alinsky's Rules for Radicals to conservatism. But it's hard to use "Make the enemy live up to their own book of rules" when their rule is pretty much "unconstructive gestures that make us feel warm and fuzzy even as they screw other people over." Plus, we have jobs and lives that make Code Pinko-style organization difficult...but we're smarter, we should be able to figure this out.)